[CS-FSLUG] For you Journalists

[Timothy Butler]

> I don't suppose I could get a few hints on how I could improve it. I
> was about to hand off the job, but I guess I could give it a try :-) .

	You might supplement it with proactive replies to the kinds of  
comments you received here -- to what extent are the various  
arguments worth considering? I'd focus on the point that the average  
Linux user (and even Mac OS X user) is more technically sophisticated  
than the Windows user. How does that change the dynamic, if at all?

	Also, consider dumping the "It's my opinion" for a firmer statement  
("The reason Linux and Mac OS X..." or "One of the reasons..."). That  
would make it more forceful.

	Just take a quick pass over it, don't worry too much. I'll take a  
closer look at it before it is published. Mostly worry about making  
your argument a bit more water tight, if possible.

	-Tim

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