[CS-FSLUG] For you Journalists

[Nathan T.]

On 3/11/06, Timothy Butler <tbutler at ofb.biz> wrote:
> I think the others raise good points, but you have some decent points
> as well. You almost have yourself a commentary there. Why not look it
> over once or twice more and send it to me. I'll do an edit of it and
> then publish it under your name, if you'd like.
>
>         -Tim

I don't suppose I could get a few hints on how I could improve it. I
was about to hand off the job, but I guess I could give it a try :-) .

Anyone have any comments or advice before I try this?